FINAL EXAM BC P1: 一幅感人的画面 /未完成

     推开通往后院的门，江水汩汩地流水映入眼里。我的安乐窝靠近大江，黄昏时分，停泊在码头的渔船的桅杆上绾着夕阳的光线格外迷人。
     顿时，正向阳光偎热的我伤心起来。哥哥昨天失踪了。我们的家经济拮据，一天三餐都是有爸爸捕鱼换来的血汗钱。这几天，爸爸因操劳过度而躺在家里休息，养病。看到家里的日常用品所剩无几，妈妈正打算到邻近的市廛添购，可是钱不够了。
     哥哥有责任心，时常帮爸妈做家务。他一板一眼的帮忙洗碗，收衣服等， 但从不发怨言。“哀哀父母，生我劬劳”，是他的法则。当塑胶袋是书包，在同窗的嘲笑中，我们执著着。
     昨天，哥哥便自个儿出去捕鱼。老天的无情，让哥哥碰上大雨，失去踪影。父母急得一刻都不得安宁，也不顾吃啜了。
     ‘叩’‘叩’‘叩’......，急促地敲门声，等待我去开门。一打开门，？？？？

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English Paper 1 Section A-Informal Letter (FINAL EXAM)

Any wrong in grammar or others, please give your comments and advices. Thank You!!!

P.O.BOX 344

Taman Subject

96507, Bintangor

1 November 2010

Dear anonymous,

   How are you? I hope you are in the pink of health. Please send my regards to your parent.

               

                I wrote this letter aimed to tell the ways you can improve in your studies and pass exams with flying colours. First and foremost, you should never underestimate your abilities. If you failed in your exam, avoid being dejected, depressed and upset. Instead, you have to do correction and regularly revise all your subjects in order to prepare in your next exam. Keep in mind do not study at last minute.

                When you are in hot soup, please to be brave and seek assistance and guidance by enrolling in a good tuition centre. Gradually, you will learn more besides the lessons in the class. Undeniably, you must be more confident and set time for revision, as ‘Procrastination is the thief of time’. For example, you fixed time for recreation, sports and studies in balance for optimum study because the brain thinking fast and more efficiently.

                Do not forget to get help from other friends who are good at different subjects. In study, we have to asking and learning, especially from friends. During free time, you may read widely and extensively to improve your language skills. For instance, you can choose the selection of good language magazines like Readers’ Digest, ‘Dewan Siswa’ and so on. You have to copy and consult dictionary for perplexed and new words.

                Ultimately, ‘Time is precious’ and you  have to fasten the rate you study as SPM is just around the corner. During exam, you have go through the notes in a nutshell. I wish you will do your best and succeed. I think your marks will rocket soon.

Yours sincerely,

Leong

Deforestation is at its peak

                                                                                                    (Source: WWF 2005 mongabay.com)

Frasa-frasa yang boleh dipraktikkan dalam PENULISAN.....

1. ambil mudah

2. tidak ambil kisah

3. menutup mata

4. membuka mata

    Ayat Contoh: Semua pihak harus membuka mata terhadap kepentingan menabung.

    Ayat Biasa: Semua pihak harus menyedarkan diri terhadap kepentingan menabung.

5. menemui ajal

6. memekakkan telinga

7. buah mulut

    Ayat Contoh: Masalah pembuangan bayi sering menjadi buah mulut masyarakat.

    Ayat Biasa: Masalah pembuangan bayi sering menjadi polemik yang hangat diperkatakan.

8. mengadunkan satu kombinasi usaha yang cukup padu                                         

9.  menagih komitmen

10. memerah otak

11. mengundang kontroversi

12. menggembleng kudrat= berganding bahu/ tangan

13. mati akal: buntu fikiran/ tidak dapat menyelesaikan masalah yang dihadapi

14. titik peluh: hasil usaha yang sungguh-sungguh

15. mencari jalan

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